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9. Chapters 79 and 81 of Seven Pillars of Wisdom. In Seven Pillars, there would appear to be circumstantial evidence against the truth of the Deraa incident, to be found not only in the Deraa chapter itself, 80 (see point 10), but also in the chapters bracketting it, 79 and 81. These relate events of the days immediately before and after the alleged incident, and contain details which tend to contradict its reality.
     In Chapter 79, Lawrence describes his sojourn at Azrak in mid-November 1917 using language strongly suggestive of a lengthy stay there, and thus consistent with his aforementioned "ten days" reference: "Then began our flood of visitors. All day and every day they came," "day after day," "at last," "these slow nights," etc. One or two such statements could perhaps be considered exaggerations by Lawrence, but the four or five such seem to reinforce one another. Yet, if the Deraa chapter is true, Lawrence spent only about five days at Azrak, November 12 — 16, before leaving it on the 17th on the Hauran reconnaissance ride which took him to Deraa on November 20. As previously mentioned, the entire ride would have taken him about five days, November 17 — 22. In fact, since the temporal references above occur in Seven Pillars only after the mention of Lieutenant Wood's departure from Azrak, which took place on November 14, the Seven Pillars time-line leaves just three days, November 14 — 16, for all the subsequent experiences of Chapter 79. This is rather odd.
     The only extant wartime evidence for Lawrence's whereabouts during that crucial week, apart from the problematic "ten days" passage previously quoted, is a mention, in his October 1918 report on "The Destruction of the Fourth Army," that "Talal... had come to me in Azrak in 1917." This meeting, according to the Seven Pillars account, occurred in the days after Lt. Wood left Azrak on November 14. The October 1918 mention thus apparently confirms Lawrence's Seven Pillars account of that meeting at Azrak, but not of the joint reconnaissance which in Seven Pillars follows it.
     Moreover, in Chapter 81 of Seven Pillars, Lawrence describes his return from Deraa to Azrak on November 22 and the factors then affecting his decision to ride south to Akaba the very next day. The bad weather, which discouraged further raids, and the unpleasant crowd of visitors are the main factors mentioned. His physical condition is not mentioned in this connection, though it would, of course, have been a major consideration if he had just been tortured. Indeed, his mention of the other factors seems superfluous, and could therefore be interpreted as a revealing admission.
     Remarkably, Chapters 79 and 81 flow together quite well without Chapter 80 placed between them, as indeed they appeared in the 1927 abridgement Revolt in the Desert, from which the Deraa chapter was removed. How could Lawrence have committed such telltale mistakes in Seven Pillars (if, in fact, they were such)? As literary critics have noted, he was an extremely "granular" writer, concentrating intensely on individual scenes, but rather neglecting to knit his narrative together. "It crawls," he himself once complained of Seven Pillars. His blindness to the larger context could well-have resulted in such Deraa oversights.
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Scattered Tracks on the Lawrence Trail: Twelve Essays on T.E. Lawrence by J. N. Lockman, Falcon Books, 1996, pp. 128-138.